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    I just finished this site for an LA based Burlesque Dance group "Je Suis Femme". I really love the way it turned out, but I want feedback from the design community. I would label myself an "intermediate" level designer. It's been a long road as I've been self teaching myself over the past two years and trying to be standards compliant etc.

    Any and all feedback is welcome...I want to learn where I need to improve on both design and coding. Thanks in advance for your time!

    WEBSITE TO CRITIQUE: http://BlushingMovement.com
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    A Website Design is good if it is fit to the required theme and layout. Once you are there with the required layouts and you have control over its theme, then its very is to manage the rest.
    • CommentAuthorNanimo
    • CommentTimeOct 15th 2011
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    The very first thing that struck me as the page loaded was that although the design was quite pretty and lush, I would have assumed that it was a generic theatre or cinema website. I think the women need to have more prominence on the homepage.

    The second thing that I noticed was the cigar at the bottom. To be blunt, it looks more like a sausage.

    The third issue was the fact that I was waiting for a "Blushing Movement" logo to load.

    Finally, the site loaded *very* slowly for me, but that might be because I'm in the UK.

    Those are just first impressions, I might come back later with some more after I've explored a little.

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